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IMPROPER ENGLISH GRAMMAR

by WOODY

 
Hatians living at the dump
by Heather
Forum Owner

When I went to deliver garbage to the dump, I always see Haitians sleeping/living inside auto wrecks. I did not feel safe, these people are actually living at the dump and are obviously desparate for living and if they see a woman drive up by herself, they might just try and rob me. I kept the car running and I didn't go very far from the car when delivering the garbage.

I had a friend who was robbed FACE TO FACE with a Haitian. He beat her up, stolen her purse and nearly raped her (luckily a gentleman was approaching the scene when this part was taking place)

Later, after she regrouped, she travelled with the police to the dump to try and find this person. She pointed him out, and the police said they can take it from there, then they drove her back to the station and she didn't hear anything about it again.

YOUR GRAMMAR IS SUCH A MEDIOCRITY.

1-DELIVER GARBAGE.
2-DESPARATE FOR LIVING.
3-THEY MIGHT JUST TRY AND ROB ME.
4-I KEPT THE CAR RUNNING AND I DIDN'T GO VERY FAR FROM THE CAR.
5-DELIVERING THE GARBAGE.
6-ROBED FACE TO FACE WITH A HAITIAN.
7-WHEN THIS PART WAS TAKING PLACE.
8-SHE REGROUPED.
9-TO TRY AND FIND THIS PERSON.
10-THEY CAN TAKE IT FROM THERE.

A PERSON WITH A GOOD EDUCATION KNOWS HOW TO WRITE WITH
GRAMMATICAL UNDERSTANDING.





Posted on Mar 23, 2002, 7:25 PM

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