Gotta love those love songs! This flowed along really well to me, I liked it alot!
Just a couple of minor suggestions...bridge 1, maybe use anymore instead of no more and in bridge 2, maybe use wasn't instead of weren't and again use anymore instead of no more. Just my personal preferences I guess.
Nice Job!
Susan
Posted on Apr 2, 2000, 1:28 AM from IP address 140.254.114.97
This flowed along really well to me, I liked it alot!