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Lot of play around a line that does not work Paul. Graham on May 10, 2000, 8:11 PM

The only line that doesn't seem right to me Glen. Graham on May 10, 2000, 8:05 PM

Is better. Graham on May 10, 2000, 7:55 PM

Better. on May 10, 2000, 7:46 PM

Cindy--. on May 10, 2000, 6:16 PM

Untitled. on May 10, 2000, 4:06 PM

reel kute. on May 10, 2000, 3:57 PM

"Misunderstood" -- critiqued. on May 10, 2000, 3:24 PM

enjoyable read!. on May 10, 2000, 2:45 PM

Interesting storyline!. on May 10, 2000, 2:40 PM

Thanks for sharing..... on May 10, 2000, 2:34 PM

fun song..... on May 10, 2000, 2:29 PM

"I'll Meet You In The Music" -- critiqued. on May 10, 2000, 1:25 PM

Please don't take this the wrong way .... on May 10, 2000, 1:07 PM

"Love" -- critiqued. on May 10, 2000, 12:54 PM

Is ther anywhere you won't go for a rhyme Stan?. Graham on May 10, 2000, 11:47 AM

Hi Folks, some comments inside. Michael Fortunato on May 10, 2000, 8:01 AM

Better Song than "Holes in the Floor of Heaven". on May 10, 2000, 6:22 AM

Beautiful. Calvin on May 10, 2000, 5:57 AM

Nice!. on May 10, 2000, 3:57 AM

Love is in the air Cobber. Graham on May 10, 2000, 3:50 AM

Thanks Marilyn. on May 10, 2000, 12:57 AM

I think they tampa with the water in Tampa. Graham on May 10, 2000, 12:46 AM

Nicely done!. on May 10, 2000, 12:16 AM

Nice Kid. You two should kep breeding them. ntxt. on May 9, 2000, 10:16 PM

Stan--. on May 9, 2000, 10:14 PM

Calvin--. on May 9, 2000, 10:08 PM

Untitled. on May 9, 2000, 9:34 PM

Try this Ryan. Hope it helps. Is yours. on May 9, 2000, 7:52 PM

The ffriends their love brought throws me some. on May 9, 2000, 7:02 PM

Would say a heartbeat ballad but... on May 9, 2000, 6:56 PM

Stan. I gotta say. on May 9, 2000, 6:51 PM

Thanks Kathy and Cindy. on May 9, 2000, 2:12 PM

I remember..... on May 9, 2000, 12:03 PM

Title's also been a HIT for Gloria Estefan.... on May 9, 2000, 10:38 AM

much better. Now. Graham on May 9, 2000, 10:05 AM

Pretty good. particularly for a first one. on May 9, 2000, 5:05 AM

Thanks!. on May 9, 2000, 1:42 AM

Calvin--. on May 8, 2000, 10:25 PM

Wayne--. on May 8, 2000, 10:18 PM

My condolances Shayne. Graham. ntxt. Graham on May 8, 2000, 8:11 PM

Condition upgraded to fair. on May 8, 2000, 7:51 PM

Prayers are with him!. Brenda on May 8, 2000, 6:06 PM

You could get your message over better. on May 8, 2000, 4:06 PM

Interesting storyline. on May 8, 2000, 3:51 PM

Nice one!. on May 8, 2000, 3:45 PM

Interesting storyline. on May 8, 2000, 3:41 PM

Good start..... on May 8, 2000, 3:38 PM

Inspirational. on May 8, 2000, 3:37 PM

will do!. on May 8, 2000, 3:34 PM

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