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Wayne, you're right (sord of). on Apr 27, 2000, 12:20 PM

Ron--. on Apr 26, 2000, 10:56 PM

Wayne--. on Apr 26, 2000, 10:49 PM

cool premise. on Apr 26, 2000, 8:33 PM

I'd have to agree with Anthony, but.... on Apr 26, 2000, 8:10 PM

I like this one.... on Apr 26, 2000, 8:00 PM

Perhaps a third person approach. on Apr 26, 2000, 7:48 PM

Has a tropicana feel to it. on Apr 26, 2000, 7:38 PM

Good advise already. on Apr 26, 2000, 6:46 PM

Send it on Pete.. on Apr 26, 2000, 6:14 PM

Obtuse?. on Apr 26, 2000, 2:23 PM

change a to as. on Apr 26, 2000, 12:13 PM

maybe not sure. on Apr 26, 2000, 12:08 PM

Nice to have an hour of a not the same old stuff radio to listen to. Thanks Marilyn.ntxt. on Apr 25, 2000, 11:35 PM

error graham. wayne on Apr 25, 2000, 10:00 PM

A bit confused Ron. Graham on Apr 25, 2000, 8:45 PM

I guess this is novelty song. Graham on Apr 25, 2000, 8:33 PM

An interesting read even though I didn't understand it. Graham on Apr 25, 2000, 8:19 PM

Untitled. on Apr 25, 2000, 3:57 PM

Some suggestions (as is my wont). on Apr 25, 2000, 3:23 PM

Thanks for the tip, Shayne!. on Apr 25, 2000, 2:40 PM

"Paralyzed" -- critiqued. on Apr 25, 2000, 2:36 PM

Another Drummer of Jimmy's. on Apr 25, 2000, 1:49 PM

"New Seasons" -- critiqued. on Apr 25, 2000, 10:44 AM

Pretty good rewrite!. on Apr 25, 2000, 10:06 AM

"I'm Glad She's Gone" -- critiqued. on Apr 25, 2000, 10:03 AM

A Winning "Loser". on Apr 25, 2000, 9:59 AM

Wow, THANKS for Sharin', Shayne!. on Apr 25, 2000, 9:28 AM

I like the re-write much better. on Apr 25, 2000, 2:16 AM

Quite well-written. on Apr 25, 2000, 2:11 AM

Look Away. on Apr 25, 2000, 1:20 AM

You're prety good at this backwards way of saying stuff. Graham on Apr 24, 2000, 11:48 PM

Sums up enforced loneliness pretty good. on Apr 24, 2000, 9:07 PM

Ashlee--. on Apr 24, 2000, 7:53 PM

Graham--. on Apr 24, 2000, 7:47 PM

Brent--. on Apr 24, 2000, 7:39 PM

There's a lot to read, but....... on Apr 24, 2000, 7:31 PM

positive message. on Apr 24, 2000, 7:18 PM

hasn't f;oated dowmn here yet Don. Check later. ntxt. on Apr 24, 2000, 7:04 PM

Demos and Writing Credit. RobertK on Apr 24, 2000, 1:23 PM

when the rain won't stop. on Apr 24, 2000, 12:52 AM

back to your roots. on Apr 24, 2000, 12:50 AM

Area Code 615. on Apr 24, 2000, 12:45 AM

Thanks for sharing Shayne :-) (ntxt). on Apr 24, 2000, 12:38 AM

I use this as a referance quite often. Graham on Apr 23, 2000, 8:10 PM

Rhyme scheme.... on Apr 23, 2000, 5:41 PM

Hi Brent.... on Apr 23, 2000, 1:41 PM

We got a song down here. Graham on Apr 23, 2000, 11:36 AM

good one!. on Apr 23, 2000, 2:26 AM

Very nice. on Apr 23, 2000, 2:21 AM

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