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"Outside The Orphanage" -- critiqued
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DGR
on Feb 29, 2000, 12:48 PM
"Hearts Are Dancing" -- critiqued
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DGR
on Feb 29, 2000, 11:41 AM
Show Some Courtesy
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Billy
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:53 AM
"Every Time I Hear The News" -- critiqued
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DGR
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:47 AM
If he thinks that blonde hair's real
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Billy
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:46 AM
melody d’amour
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Billy
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:32 AM
funky pink sunglasses
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Billy
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:24 AM
"Spontaneous" -- critiqued
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DGR
on Feb 29, 2000, 10:17 AM
Oh YEAH!---
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Stan on Feb 29, 2000, 10:06 AM
Looks Good.
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Pete
on Feb 29, 2000, 9:28 AM
Nice one
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Sandi
on Feb 29, 2000, 8:28 AM
I agree with Barbara
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Sandi
on Feb 29, 2000, 8:25 AM
Nice one Brenda
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Peter Kristian
on Feb 29, 2000, 7:36 AM
Untitled
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Michael Fortunato
on Feb 29, 2000, 7:10 AM
I Like it
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Janice Romano
on Feb 29, 2000, 6:14 AM
I needed the laugh
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Janice Romano
on Feb 29, 2000, 6:00 AM
Untitled
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Barbara
on Feb 29, 2000, 5:45 AM
comments
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Barbara
on Feb 29, 2000, 5:41 AM
Untitled
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Barbara
on Feb 29, 2000, 5:34 AM
Untitled
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Barbara
on Feb 29, 2000, 2:28 AM
Black Lace Panties
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Barbara
on Feb 29, 2000, 2:00 AM
Nice One!
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Susan
on Feb 29, 2000, 1:55 AM
blp
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Marilyn
on Feb 29, 2000, 1:34 AM
Navigate Your Heart
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Marilyn
on Feb 29, 2000, 1:01 AM
:) Nice work, Steve
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Ron Dalton
on Feb 28, 2000, 11:48 PM
Dancing Hearts
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Charlie
on Feb 28, 2000, 10:39 PM
Too Cute
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Sandi
on Feb 28, 2000, 10:19 PM
Disappointed
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Vic Gibbs
on Feb 28, 2000, 10:10 PM
Fun read
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Sandi
on Feb 28, 2000, 10:10 PM
black lace...
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Charlie
on Feb 28, 2000, 10:07 PM
I like
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Sandi
on Feb 28, 2000, 9:59 PM
duh, forgot the URL for REAL AUDIO
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Steve Biederman
on Feb 28, 2000, 9:50 PM
A Cardboard Apartment
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Marilyn/Graham
on Feb 28, 2000, 9:23 PM
Outside the Bedroom door
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Marilyn/Graham
on Feb 28, 2000, 9:18 PM
two separate hearts
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Marilyn/Graham
on Feb 28, 2000, 8:49 PM
good one!
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kathy
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:51 PM
Comments/critique
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Barbara
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:46 PM
Very cute!
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kathy
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:43 PM
Thanks HANK
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Marilyn
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:33 PM
Great Hook!
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Susan
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:30 PM
Outside the Orphanage
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Marilyn
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:28 PM
thanks
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Marilyn
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:13 PM
Corrections/Omit above
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Barbara
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:11 PM
Sweet Like The First
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Marilyn
on Feb 28, 2000, 7:08 PM
I'llTake my Time
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Marilyn
on Feb 28, 2000, 6:59 PM
Cute.
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Graham
on Feb 28, 2000, 6:33 PM
It's come a long way!
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Susan
on Feb 28, 2000, 6:30 PM
I like this alot!
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Susan
on Feb 28, 2000, 6:11 PM
A Cardboard Apartment
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Shayne
on Feb 28, 2000, 5:44 PM
it can work but
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Graham on Feb 28, 2000, 5:08 PM
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